darklordofpenguins's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[the Burly Brawl]

slow and boring

This flash was slow and boring when it was trying to mimic a fast paced action scene and it just doesn't work, even if you were trying to make it look slow-motion. You have an interesting style, it's not 100% original, but what is. Keep trying and maybe work on something a little more creative.

[Dawn of the Dead in Milto]

For a Dawn of the Dead spoof, not much spoofing

The only reference to Dawn of the Dead was the zombies and the mall. No actual references in plot or even quotes. there was more video game references than DotD. If you plan to parody something, then parody it. Don't say it's a parody if it doesn't actually parody what you say it's going to parody.

[awien]

Good but too short.

It would have been better if you just combined that flash with the next part and had a longer flash. But apart from the short length it was pretty good. I laughed at the kid getting shot with the laser beam.

[WWE Randoms]

This Sucked.

Do some more tutorials before submitting a piece to Newgrounds. There was only a tiny bit of actual animation in this flash. The rest was just moving around the characters. Better luck next time.

[Billy Doomsday 2]

Obvious.

The storyline was kinda obvious, it's been done before. Also it was annoying that he didn't face the 4th wall when he was supposedly talking to the audience.

z7xfla responds:

He's a cartoon character, not an actor. =P

Next time I'll include front views though.

[Erica's Farm 1]

beautiful, beautiful nonsense ^__^

This flash made absolutely no sense but it's sheer brillance for what it is. I'm guessing by the "1" in the title this is the first in a series so some of the lack of plot is because this is an introductory episode. I guess that there will be more of a plot in the next episode but don't make it too plotty, make it crazy and random, like ARFENHOUSE! rawr arfenhouse!

[The Wet Side of Damp]

it isn't a masterpiece

This flash wasn't that great in my opinion. The story was slow and empty. People have said the story is unique. It's not unique. The only way it's unique is that it lacks any complexity.
Story: creature has a wife and kid, creature goes to get some kind of food, while away wife is killed and kid is missing. creature gets angry, find monster, transforms, kills monster, cut open the monster and finds kid, then gets killed by monster as it falls over dead. kid probably survives but nothing says it does.
The animation wasn't ground-breaking but since you are only 15 that's fine. all I can say is keep working at it and think of a deeper plot, maybe add some different sounds, change the mood of the flash as it moves along.